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Year 4 Examples of excellent writing

In this writing, the children were asked to take a different view point. The intention here is clear and the paragraphing is excellent.

The facts were found using the internet but this is an excellent example of choosing facts that are understood. They have been put in their own words. Confident use of a title and subheadings; illustrations and bullet points; careful editing.